Black Poetry : No Words....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Aug 4, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No words, for this
    but I'll try to flow anyway
    the feeling won't die
    ever, it radiates in what I say
    it personifies in what I do
    so completely immersed in you
    am I
    Can't escape this maze
    nor do I want to.
    Do you? Days
    into nights into an eternity
    of all that is us,
    I smile as I envision this reality
    that nobody else can clearly see
    It's of no matter what others claim to be,
    for what makes one plus one we,
    is simply our destiny,
    Every breath I take is like inhaling
    the essence of your rose
    24/7, those petals, be they red,
    yellow, or white are unlike those
    of any other. The flower is
    undeniably you.
    Nothing else I could do
    really, but to try
    make an effort
    contemplate
    attempt to
    demonstrate
    by flowing
    with
    words
    that emanate
    when
    there simply...
    are none
     
  2. Envy

    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel this so much, yet I'm left without the right words to describe. Leaving it as I feel this alot.

    Envy :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i know what u mean when there is no words
    i be like dat at times more then few
     
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    Once again your poetic prowess astounds...

    Watz :wink: amazing is for there to be "none"
    this was close to 150 of the most exquisitely crafted "none" I've ever read...

    bravo... :toast: touche'
     
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    You weld an amazing craft sis!!!!!!
    I just love your flow!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Envy, saying that you feel it, are words that make me smile. Thank you for such a witty reply.
    Happens to you too Rich? Make you long for just the right phrase, doesn't it? Thank you for letting me know you "get" this.
    Now 7th, you continue to humble me so much. Thank you brotha.
    Your praise is too kind Purplemoons, thank you poet.
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhhh, so beautiful, watz. "Every breath I take is like inhaling the essence of your rose..." WOW, girl.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you could appreciate this line gempis, thank you so much poet.
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i'm with 7th poet on this one...
    cause for someone without the words...well
    thank god you got the emotion and the language..
    nice watz...
     
  10. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey I'm too too through!!!!!
     
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