Black Poetry : No.words.to.write*

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have no words to write
    None are left inside
    Still I continue to write these lines
    Of old moons crossing over silver stars
    Weakened phrases
    Silly poems
    Lovely anecdotes
    Still movements
    Invisible gestures
    Wondering minds
    Still I collide with my own
    Never had these words inside
    But now, I still contain these rainy days
    Ive begun to turn lies into truth
    Memories into reality
    Storms into tears into fountain drinks
    Money into change
    But I am still not surprised by the reaction I get from you and them
    Had a million to kill for him
    Still wasted time on not thinking

    I have no words left to write
    No words I have written
    Left to write, not me
    But still never engaging in criminal acts
    Like when Michael was black
    And Janet had back
    Now I am back
    As I continue to drift away from the thing that means the most to me
    Poetry
    And I have refused to counteract with any one whos not of my own
    For I continue to feel alone
    People said that I am bitter
    Angry
    Mad
    With men
    Truth be told
    I am not bitter with any man
    Just because I will not let you come by when you want to
    And sleep till dawn while I cook in the kitchen
    Just because I will not allow you to use me as your sex kitten
    Means nothing to you
    But definitely a statement to be made
    Words to be saved
    Cause there will always be a day when it rains
    And when it does, my magnetic verbs
    Will leave you in a dust ball of shame
    Theyll have you reading my poetry at dusk on a curb
    Ya Heard

    Sick and tired of being tired
    Sick of being sick
    Tired and sick of being overlooked
    Not seen
    Played with
    Confused
    Mislead
    Just plain outFUCKED with
    I have ink that is dripping from my pen
    Down to my hands, words so daring and abnormal
    Leaving the soul blinded by the light shinning from my blues and whites
    If I could Id be the kite
    Flying high
    Cause believe it or not
    Im just way too fly
    Tried to kill me once but man I couldnt die
    Cause my armor is too tuff
    My mind is too swift
    Even tried to burn my words with flames and ****
    Didnt you know that my words have that fire?
    Desire to be read
    To be heard
    To be comprehended, can YOU DIG IT!

    I am no rappers delight
    Just a poet who loves to write
    And despite what you may have heard about me
    Whether it be:
    Black chick
    White chick
    Oh she think she better than me
    Or maybe, ghetto, loud chick, incapable of speaking HIS English,
    Imposter or even racist
    One title that I hold strong to
    I am an imperfect writer who falls for little
    But stands for something
    I stand for.
    Truth and reality
    Able to accept my imperfection as my reality
    Till the day when I discover the REAL me
    I stand tall to say,
    Realize truth and recognize your mistakes for it will only make a better you

    MzPoetic8705
     
  2. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow poet. Rock on.....;)
     
  3. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW HOT POEM, YOU CAME OUT YOUR CONER SWING ON THIS ONE. STRONG WORDS STRONGER POEM KEEP DOING THE THING.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop and the many reasons to write .......
     
  5. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love guys :)
     
  6. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang i wa really feelin dis frum da heart
    on the real dis is how ive been feelin 4 da longest
    i felt yo errword, u made such true statements
    so keep it real
    and flo on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A




    ****BLACKLUV AND BP***
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very deep and thoughtful poet
    flo on
    One love
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man this poem on fire flo on my poetic sista.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, where do I start with this one... It seems that when we haven't written in a while, the poetry is still in our heads, and often when it finally flows onto the page, an awesome scribe is created such as this. I think what impressed me the most, is how you conveyed the process of exchanging one unworthy muse, for the muse that was inside of you all along. 2 thumbs way up!!!!!
     
  10. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always, i am very grateful for the love....and although I may drift away from writing, it will always be my first love :)

    so thanks again for the props....appreciate it :)
     
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