Black Poetry : No Words To Write

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have no words to write
    None are left inside
    Still I continue to write these lines
    Of old moons crossing over silver stars
    Weakened phrases
    Silly poems
    Lovely anecdotes
    Still movements
    Invisible gestures
    Wondering minds
    Still I collide with my own
    Never had these words inside
    But now, I still contain these rainy days
    I’ve begun to turn lies into truth
    Memories into reality
    Storms into tears into fountain drinks
    Money into change
    But I am still not surprised by the reaction I get from you and them
    Had a million to kill for him
    Still wasted time on not thinking

    I have no words left to write
    No words I have written
    Left to write, not me
    But still never engaging in criminal acts
    Like when Michael was black
    And Janet had “back”
    Now I am back
    As I continue to drift away from the thing that means the most to me
    Poetry
    And I have refused to counteract with any one who’s not of my own…


    to be continued

    MzPoetic--11-2o-o5
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your wordz flow quite nice flow on poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome home
    happy u back
    ya words what
    as they leak
    like dat was phat
    don't stray come
    play and let it all
    flow again words
    are ya mental friend
    yeap ! dat's right
    come into the family
    light bright tonight !
    this joint of words is tyte.........
     
  4. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nevar--thanks for the love. i really appreciate it

    Rich----thanks....lol....nice flow. i am BACK...and did u even know i left??? but thanks again =)
     
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    I have no words to speak
    No outreach on this beacon
    This light you bring
    I didn't know you were gone
    I just got here so im loving the poem
    Mental digestion
    Spirts confessions
    Mirrored confessions
    Words from you breath
    Ingulp certain sections

    Im telling you what are words to speak
    Like OJ before the raiders
    The glove that made him more famous
    Or the lies that made the papers
    Its crazy now your back
    I can dwell on your statements

    Much Love Poet!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No words to write, yet you have flowed thought processes so smoothly. There was such an ease to this piece...enjoyed.
     
  7. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum---thanks. great flow. and i appreciate the love

    Watzinaname---thanks for the love....and i am glad that u enjoyed the flow poet =)
     
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