Black Poetry : No where to Hide

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, May 17, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don’t even know
    What really happens
    But when I feel it….
    It seems to….
    Hit me like a train…
    Got me spinning around
    Knowing that it is real
    Sends me in chills
    The thrills he brings..
    Just callin my name….
    And I fall even harder
    And I cant……
    I cant seem to run
    I cant seem to hide
    The love floats so free
    As my heart yearns for his..
    This mans soul pulls me
    Have me in sweats
    and the cries
    singin the happy blues
    as the moon takes its bow
    and the stars take us about
    Hurting but feeling so good
    As my feelings seem to just grow…..

    The feelings I hold deep inside…
    Wantin to share this sweet secert
    When I look in his eyes…
    I get this vibe
    A warm breeze comes over me
    Feelin his touch…
    The sunshine gleams
    And joy seems to rain
    wishin we can share
    each moment together
    but I still try to run..
    tryin to be true to my heart
    knowin he is the one
    no where to hide
    no where to run
    no where to go and release
    the passion inside
    as the hurt feels so good…
    knowing that he loves me back..
    and I cant even run….
    how i love this man....
    my mate
    my lover
    my my my
    mine....

    :flirt: :luv: :flirt: :help:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like somebody in wuv !!!!
    and falling into da depth of heart
    nice scribing here flow on !
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now Gurl...You know I be liking this. Oh so intimate...so very intimate. :heart:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was deep girl...
    as "Kem" would say...

    When Love Calls...
    ........theres no where to run
    def' no where to hide

    Nice scribe... :toast:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The only thing that comes to a runner is...TIRED FEET :laugh: ...
    what are you running for, or from? ...love will find you...wherever you go
    very nice poem...you're on a roll, keep it comming
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh snap....

    Claim that man...in the name of Jeeeesus
    Alright now, you worked this one girl.
    I need to get to claiming myself :heart:
     
  7. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Poem
    Love is A Beautiful thing and you really
    defined LOVE in this poem :luvv:

    Great
    Monad.poetress


     
  8. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel,

    U poetically described Your every feeling and experience in this connection down to the "dot on a gnat's behind"

    Being all of that, aint nothing to do but to embrace it and take it higher.....

    "Running away sure aint gonna help you, i'm gonna get you, girl, i'm gonna get you"

    ....as the old school crooner sings......

    Peace and Blessings
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...:lol: yup
    no where to hide either....
    :thanks: for the support and love given here

    Joyce... :thanks: so much i am happy you enjoyed my scribe

    queentswana..thanks for the loving support you always give...:)

    Nita..claim well sis ya got a point....:lol: thanks for the love gurl

    monad.poetress :thanks:

    rasheed...lol :thanks: for the love..yeah i think he got me ya know :lol:

    :thanks: again yall for all the loving support
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You stuck your lyrical toe in this one. Beautiful sista! I enjoyed it. :D :thanks:
     
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