Black Poetry : No Vacancy

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He opened her door
    And love walked right into him
    Her leaving the door unlocked
    was much more than a whim

    She knew that he was meant
    to occupy a space
    within each chamber of her heart
    filling that void in each place

    And now that they're entwined
    his essence flows through her veins
    he's that gentle shower
    saturating her garden as it rains

    Teardrops of splendor fall
    leaving traces on love's pages
    Fermenting like fine wine
    growing better as it ages

    He's the honey in her tea
    steeping sweetness into her brew
    He's the sunshine that warms her
    crystal cup of fresh morning dew

    He has become that stream of
    consciousness, running through her mind
    He is now that steady, flowing current
    the most permeating flow she'll ever find

    And now there's no vacancy
    in a heart that's filled to the brim
    with him
    He opened her door...
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um umbrella please

    he's that gentle shower
    saturating her garden as it rains

    lol

    you have a way with words poet

    and that's why i like read your work

    it touches the ceiling of spirituality

    yea y'all it's another one

    another brilliant piece by Watz

    peace
     
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    "What Love has joined together"
    :couple:
    A love like this don't come knocking everyday,
    to open a :heart: , to let love find it's way.
    I've stepped inside you, staying solid as a rock,
    cause I knew to well, how to turn the lock!​
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ umbrella. That was such a kind response So'ja, you sure do humble me poet. Thank you.

    A love like that
    is definitely a rarity
    Saying make yourself
    at home, in all sincerity
    Thank you so much tswana, you are so on point in your poetic responses, sis.
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... no vacancy
    no room for others for the love and wisdom wraps us..

    watzinaname,
    as always i'm feeling you.

    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    noone can enter just no Vacancy awesome scribing sis
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you can feel this vibe j'hiah, I tend to feel your scribes as well. So good to see ya, thank you.
    Her heart is filled with him, you humble me brotha Rich, thank you.
     
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    Yo sis can I experience THIS?????? Hotness!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Scry'be, appreciated poet.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    Lovely, Lovely, Lovely


    And now there's no vacancy
    in a heart that's filled to the brim
    with him
    He opened her door...


    This piece flowed like a beautiful river.
     
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