Black Poetry : no trust

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by channie, Sep 10, 2003.

  1. channie

    channie Member MEMBER

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    here i go again writting about you
    yeah once again you left me confused
    and i don think i can ever say i trust you
    and you ask why let me tell you

    you say things you dont mean
    and thats just the start
    you build things up then take it apart

    and i can honestly say the trust
    i have will never be found
    because you pick me up just to let me down


    and if you dont trust you dont have nothing right
    so lets just end this one with out a fight
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum..... felt this one in my soul...... nice
     
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    this was nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!

    hey welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome this tyte scribe so well felt
    happy u here upon us to share love and support
    welcome:) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WElcome and lookign forward to reading more. If you don't have trust you have nothing. This was a great read.
     
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    :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: yes, emotional wave, ugh.
     
  7. channie

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    i want to thank every body who sent me a reply. thanks for all the postive messages
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum gurl, been there, done that, continue to do that. you said it all in 3 1/2 stanzas. Love it.
     
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