Black Poetry : "No Trespassers"

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "No Trespassers" is what the sign
    read on these thoughts of mine that

    danced still/alone/naked under
    aloe vera strobed lights to be soothed

    wedding loneliness so the emptiness
    wasn't so empty anymore

    and the scalding of fluid angst falling
    didn't burn anymore

    and forgetting of remembrances of those
    that induced my emotional bloodletting
    was...complete

    U akted az if U kouldn't reed and
    Intered...showing me my Kondishuned
    (Ill)iteracy that luv didn't live
    here anymoor,

    and taught me how to read
    so I could

    love
    once

    again

    (c)2001 garrison aka blakverb
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    It's about time ya got here!!! I've been holdin' the door open for ya brotha!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yo for holding the door, it took a while to find this santuary but a bro made it.

    peace, blak
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Nice piece...

    keep flowin' like ya' know sumpin'!!
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmmmmmmmm :read: :D
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ...so where you be verb...

    tight read to bring back sis
    love it!!
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Triniti, thank you...Black Verb....Dios Mio, man. Even changed the spelling up in this one to add to the potency of this piece. I'm beyond words....