Black Poetry : No Tittle

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    High Imagination,
    Marinating Day Dreams,
    My eyes passed a note
    your smile checked yes
    whether standing in reality
    or floating on my sub-conscious,
    It’s the aroma
    of your familiar scent
    that leaves a lasting impression,
    Taking my time
    to carefully pick and sort
    through all that does not belong,
    Slowly, as I get to know you
    accepting totally the good and bad
    of all that is left,
    There are those who claim
    they definitely have better
    while others do covet
    what I wish to call my own,
    So no matter
    their unwanted perceptions,
    Wanting to inhale you
    is all I really desire.

    There are times I call
    just to hear your voice,
    Not that I want anything
    it’s more about
    wanting to know you are there
    to listen to your soothing melody
    because when I have you,
    I can never get enough of you
    like an insatiable addiction
    eating away at me from the core,
    And when you are around no longer
    I yearn to be in your presence
    dancing on the positive karma
    you unknowingly leave behind,
    A trail from one person to the next
    as I follow aimlessly
    drifting over to the left,
    Understanding if I had to live
    all of my days like today
    with out you in my life,
    I would rather wake up to yesterday
    eyes wide with anticipation
    just to have the hope
    of knowing you might be in my tomorrow.

    I look at you
    with nothing particular on my mind,
    Just mentally sketching your image
    so when I am alone at night
    surrounded completely by darkness
    my heart the only beat I hear,
    I vividly replay your picture
    believing one day
    soon next to me you will snuggle,
    Where in this mellow haze
    cloud nine is the lobby
    the only place to go is up,
    Experiencing your mental intimacy
    feeling the heat from your body’s pulse
    shows growth from my heart’s past,
    So sit and share with me
    exchange stories with our true self
    which brings realness
    of all we have in common,
    That together we see higher than my imagination,
    And marinate sweeter than my day dreams.

    Caramelpython 11/2003
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this wow..
    beautiful
    emotions felt deep within...
    nice work CP...wow:angel1:
    hit me up we need to talk
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow ...tyte scribe flow on
     
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    Smooth
    Absorbing the warmth
    Of your flow.
    Peace
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks 4 the love you 3 are tite poets!
     
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    Oh my....this was incredible!

    Understanding if I had to live
    all of my days like today
    with out you in my life,
    I would rather wake up to yesterday
    eyes wide with anticipation
    just to have the hope
    of knowing you might be in my tomorrow.


    This is the verse of aaaaaaalllllll verses! Def'
    you stirred my emotions with this piece...
    feeling the frailty of one humanity without
    that "one"...the only "one"....the "one"
    you choose...the "one" you breath for...

    I can relate...
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stand before thee humble yet proud..TY all

    angelicsage.... you honor me with our words and I feel blessed

    Olakuoto..........You keep it real on here and I love that real flow Ola my sister Ola!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just 4 u my friend just 4 u....
     
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    well this is a breathe of fresh air to read this morning.... :blush:
    Love's Submission thas what i would call it....
    for your yesterday have became tomorrow
    as tomorrow became your furture:wink:
    nice drop
     
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    This was beautiful poet! Deeply moving
     
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