Black Poetry : no title

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once my she-ro who saved me from
    the evil grasp of darkness I
    realize that you don't love me
    anymore and I see the diabolical
    Mr. Sandman coercing me to sleep
    and watch you take back all the
    love you've given me.............I
    never knew you would be the one
    why I'd avoid my dreams........
    the emptiness of your words the
    sarcasm in your answers the shallowness
    of your hellos has got me locked
    in a room with no memories and
    I lay in a fetal position praying
    for you to hurry up and leave the
    pictures that I've created of you.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!

    This is deep!!
    N2 is N-thought...
     
  3. Destee

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    BlakVerb ... deep Bruh Man

    strange how a thing can go
    from one extreme to the other

    luv'n this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    you have a gift for making us feel...

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    brutha dis was deep and outlooks in depth
    tyte write
     
  6. shaz

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    well written poet - I feel like I have been here before
     
  7. watzinaname

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    Quite an empty and cold feeling, this was a piercing write.
     
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    this is straight from the core of the heart where emptiness & love become 1.......DEEP INDEED!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    no words...sounds of
    praise...of prayer...
    no words....
    ooooooo.....aaaaah....
    yeah..
     
  10. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very deep and sentimental. Flow on, keep it goin!!
     
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