Black Poetry : No Title

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Oct 6, 2005.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** baby
    I mean Lady
    Queen
    Just to say the least
    Admiring you
    You set fire to
    My Soul
    Beautiful you
    Tames this beast
    Enlightment
    Delightment
    WOW
    The feeling you set
    Incredible
    So rare tho
    “Exotic” as it gets
    Loving
    Lusting
    Longing
    Its all the same
    Mentally
    Disfunctional
    With the pleasure
    You bring
    Satisfaction
    Without action
    No words
    No play
    Only a Feeling
    Set my U
    Simply
    Being your way
    You are
    The definition of a Rose
    Beautiful
    Unique
    Brittle
    Yet
    Sweet
    Sensual
    In all facets
    Reality
    Takes nothing from you
    Day dreaming?
    Real life?
    The fantasy
    That’s came True
    Mesmerized
    Hypnotized
    Extra Ordinary U
    All I know is
    You walk past everyday
    But who you are………………
    I haven’t got a clue!


    Lj
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop like how u did this one
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the one

    and i would say see something you like
    would you care for something to drink or a bite
    i've been noticing you from afar
    didnt want to startle you but would like to go to a bar (later)
    i'm a go getter strive to get what i want
    i'm the real thing don't put up a front
    king looking for a queen who can give pure satisfaction
    we can chill out or go somewhere quiet without distraction
    oh look at me i'm rambling
    but look at us were both gambling
    or whether not we can make this work
    i'm a classy lady don't worry about me freaking out or ever going beserk
    but before we go can i ask you a question before we go?

    I wanna know what's your name?

    i love the poem very much i was feeling this
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the Read Rich



    Thanks for the Read Nevar,
    like the add on may have to get together on something
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, I love this!!!
    This is so,so nice.
    Got me all smiling
    in front of the computer screen.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So intrigued by that person, got cha all wrapped around her finger, but who is she really? Guess you need to find out. This flowed so smoothly, and explained that feeling of attraction so well poet.
     
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    the one

    yes we must very soon.
     
  8. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A tyte write! Great poem.
     
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