Black Poetry : No Title

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're far away,
    but I can feel you.
    You exist in my every breath,
    In every beat of my heart,
    Adding sizzle
    In all the right places.
    Even when I close my eyes,
    I see your face and feel
    the fire of your carress.
    your presence is a tangible thing......
    yet as hard to grasp as the air.
    I reach for you,
    but you elude me.
    Still, I can feel you,
    The softness of a petal,
    A warm wind on my cheek,
    A ray in my vision,
    A distant light that
    forever
    will draw me near.​
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: this piece touched me, I can relate. Thanks for the beautiful scribe
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how i know this so well
    what a feeling this leave
    nice flowing !
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece is very near to me as Im far away for my special someone. Thank you for sharing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so feeling every word that artfully seeped from your pen poet, flow on.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This pretty vision is beautifully written.
     
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