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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If time could tell its future
    .... who'd listen to its past
    What makes life interesting
    ... is that it moves so fast
    If you could go back in time
    ... would you leave it there
    So the best days of your life were there to bare

    Is love a choice or a feeling
    ... and could time with its future reveal that meaning
    Or is love something that time can't decide
    ... and the future that holds is just part of the ride

    If the past was confusing
    ... could the future hold an answer,
    so your life could continue without a disaster
    Wouldn't it be great if you could release your dove
    ....because you've found your one true love.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed it would be grand
    if tyme and past made a stand
    yet moving as fast surely tyme
    will past the last tyte write ....,,
     
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    Very much diggin this reflective flow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the rhymes, the rhythm, and the thoughts about this thing we call time. Quite witty, flow on poet.
     
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    like this...very nicely posed enjoyed it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This drop still gives one thoughts to ponder, and I like that in a poem.
     
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