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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by who~is~she, Aug 9, 2004.

  1. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    Fighting to maintain the balance of my sanity/
    While I sit comprehending your narrow spaced mentality/
    dissapointed by your lack of respect/
    your intelect, or absence of/
    is a reflection direct from your mind numbing reality/
    the audasity /
    to committ peotic infadelity/
    do u honestly think just cuz you can rhyme/
    that people wanna hear that Dr. Seus ish all the time/
    a crime, /
    I say, is you smokin' that grass/
    I should call the cops and drop a dime on yo ***/
    sitting there writting peotry homocide/
    try poetacide/
    put your pen down and reminisce of when u had pride/
    back when you had skills/
    now you just makin' deals/
    with people who dont know/
    how you used to be/
    how you used to flow/
    look at the mirror, and tell me what you see/
    you've become someone that you didnt want to be/



    ......oh, it's ME!
     
  2. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte drop my fellow poet!!! Keep on doin ur [email protected] thang!!! :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah this was nice fro real kept my attention so let me drop this

    Look I fear the beast so try create a atmosphere of peace
    Make domes spin atone for sins make microphones bend and crease
    Attacks reputations with facts and devastation then go
    Back to revelation read about the coming of Christ for show
    Gin got me humming nice yo, pour a cup of that hardcore
    Corrupt wine it buck sometimes in a glass so sip galore
    My Ebonics are thug mean like an atomic submarine
    Hooked on phonics and club queens hair tonic on my mug extreme
    So fly my hot dew rag bold atop of a flagpole cats salute
    Stats acute like a knife blade, strife played a part in this fruit
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwww!
    very nicely done here love how u worked it to perfection
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Niiiiicce! I liked this. Keep dropping them :spin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flows have seasons, sometimes chocked full of meaning, sometimes, just for fun. Just do your thang poet. Keep flowing.
     
  7. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reply to Who~is~She

    Who~is~She stands boldly and speaks to Who~is~He
    The fight has been won, and sanity emerges victoriously
    Who is his new muse, this she profoundly ponders profusely
    His last muse, used his tongue together with rage loosely

    Hidden hideousness and luminous lunacy lurked behind every word
    A libelous leopard changed his spots; a miracle has occurred
    Dogmatic Doctor Seus made more than thirty-three million!!
    Because the number of ears he pleased ran into the billions!!!

    Who~is~She , Seize the Day !
    Great poem you have made !

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Completely off the richtor...
    you just captured the
    state of many writers...
    it's an everyday struggle
    not to fall into that trench

    but your flow was awesome...
    Do yo thang girl...
    Diggin this vibe!
     
  9. Vincy Ital

    Vincy Ital Active Member MEMBER

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    I was feelin it from begining to end, wonderful words sista....Bless you and your inspiration
     
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