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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Apr 2, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    being cleaved to you is like an
    ADDiction because you want me to be in SUBmission
    prone in my presentation to your verbal whips
    you need to get a grip
    or pop some medication
    for the duration
    of your life
    until all of the anger and nervous laughter
    that represents your makeup
    SUBside and EQUALize our relationship
    i’m tired of being the one who’stressed
    always watching my step
    turning to prayer jesus wept
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    now this was tight!

    definitely felt this one

    keep writing :toast:

    Jesus Is The Way And The Light!!!

    pd

    :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep the flow.:)
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks pd and baller - i appreciate your reading my work!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You conveyed a unhealthy situation so well.
    I hope this doesn't represent reality, if so,
    RUN!!! lol
    God bless.
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    skyrbe...it's just a creation...nothing more...thank you for looking out tho! lol
     
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