Black Poetry : no thank you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Sep 2, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i don't want no man
    if it means
    giving up my future
    my identity
    sacrificin my happiness
    to make u happy

    being in a position
    where im always asking why
    catering to your subconsious
    makin myself die

    if it means we can talk
    till u get a funky mood
    then everythings off course
    solemn and untrue

    and i'm on the brink
    of wondering if you'll leave
    cheat, and or lie to me
    n how i will handle it

    titterin between pure
    elation and frustration
    a hit and miss kinda bliss
    no , i cannot permit

    spinnin around in whirlwinds
    of he say she say
    so tired of the issues
    and games played

    if it means we cool for
    a week or two
    then i gotta unravel
    unresolved issues

    no thank you
    no thank you
    no thank you.:mad: :uzi: :mad:
     
  2. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "titterin between pure
    elation and frustration
    a hit and miss kinda bliss
    no , i cannot permit"

    TIGHT!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tell it all sistah .....dis was on hit
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this a man ain't worh all the depression
    much love,
    -story
     
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    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice work, i'm loving the emoticon with the gun
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HELLL YEAH! thas what I'm talkin bout...tell em where to go wit dat weak excuse for love...

    L..ies
    O..bsessions
    V..erbal
    E..xcuses

    for real MORE u came wit it right here :)
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok! you must be peeping through my windows, and listening to my phone conversations, cause you hit s*** right on the nail! how did you know? LOL i'm feelin' this for real cause it is so my life! LOL keep it flowin' girl!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all i can say is nice
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    wow...
    you tell dat bum...lol
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I won't try and change your burn. This it took me time to learn. I can only have control and change on me. I would support the person your meant to be. Any thing different It would be the same. Cause it attracted me to you I saw your game. Your thinking was clear we talked about this. I won't crowd you if I do let me know. Keep the real coming ....MORE I like your writing style.
     
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