Black Poetry : no sun-shine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Jul 30, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i cannot explain why
    today...
    the sun did not shine

    the wind would not
    blow...
    fondling the leaves
    of the willow tree
    stirring the flower
    fragrance in the
    air...

    perhaps...it was you

    the blueness of
    the sky
    faded gray
    and cried tears
    of great pain...

    because of you...
    the sun did not
    shine...

    MsDLite (c) 07.01
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GRAY SKIES BLUE

    U HAVE SHOWED ME TOMORROW'S SKIES
    Ms.D THIS BE A MASTERPIECE FO SHO!!!:D
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    somebody

    got to get on they job out in Big D we can't be having no gloomy days for MsD
    doubt worry you gonna be aiight


    DSSNY
     
  4. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow

    It's raining outside my window. This one hit like a sack of bricks.

    Feeling it,
    --Archival
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see, heah...you said this:

    "perhaps...it was you

    the blueness of
    the sky
    faded gray
    and cried tears
    of great pain... "

    THAT'S DEEP.

    i could trace the contusions
    running from end to end
    as lightning and thunder
    served to accentuate the widening {gulf}
    created by that SORRY *** individual
    that caused you great pain.

    tell me who it is, babygurl
    and $$RICH$$ and i will swoop down on
    a brutha and show him what time it iz.:)

    I'M LOVING THIS.
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am fine...

    ...just writing...
    that's all...

    those who know...
    realize i can write
    fact or fiction...

    realities~
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent Scribe!!!!

    I truly enjoyed the read....
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsD...

    I love what you bring to this page...

    *stay*

    :)
     
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