Black Poetry : no satiation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gempis, Nov 5, 2003.

  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my skin can't drink
    my heart can't eat
    my arms can't hold
    my lips can't kiss
    my hand can't touch
    my eyes can't look
    my tongue can't taste
    my nose can't smell

    enough of you

    you are drought-curing rain
    saturating the landscape
    but I can't quite
    take all of you in
    you have flooded me
    though I was so thirsty
    you are
    too much and
    not enough
    at the same time
    it's the pressin
    caressin
    squeezin
    not the sexin
    that makes me crave you
    like I have never been served
    I can't get full
    for the eating
    and I'm not sure
    if I want to but I
    keep coming back to the well
    to try
    I
    a bottomless black hole
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis this was a very tight flow...
    and i know what you mean

    my skin can't drink
    my heart can't eat
    my arms can't hold
    my lips can't kiss
    my hand can't touch
    my eyes can't look
    my tongue can't taste
    my nose can't smell

    been here..much love my big sister :angel1:
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was deep my sista...
    wow...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin dis here deep
    bottomless
    wow flow on tell me more
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW!

    Now I know this new girl has put something on u... this is truly HOT! Wow sass, this is just wow!
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblk, much love back to you, my sister. :kiss: thank you fo tha understandin

    khasm, I am honored by your reply - thank you

    $$RICH$$, always with tha love. I really really appreciates that, n back atcha

    poeticly, a "wow" from you means so much. thanks, sweetie
     
  7. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mssing your flows lately, must go back and see some more, this was tyte ish
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

    Gempis....

    you reached within my soul and stirred my deepest emotions...

    whoa...this piece gripped me...completely
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW THIS IS HOT.... :flamet: :flamet: Pouring love...Now that's a deep love....Good stuff...excuse me Greatttttt stuff.
     
  10. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WARNIN SIGN!!!!!!!

    Yeah man! Nuff Respect Due.....

    .....All Babylon Business a gwan expire...when da man wha dem call Gempis spit out a righteous fire.....Big Bout Ya!!!!!!!