Black Poetry : no response necessary (P to the P)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sraheem2, Mar 15, 2002.

  1. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you as if it was
    the first time you took my
    hand and led me
    into your sweet
    garden of multi-colored
    roses

    Your petals
    are like satin and in my
    memory you are STILL unlike
    any other

    Delicate nature
    woman with a tender
    heart of love~ virgin
    to the evil ways of men
    so willing to know

    and yet you already knew
    things about my self
    that penetrated to my core
    down in places
    the mother of my children
    hadn't touched before

    You enlightened me
    with your wisdom
    your old soul
    your~young~lady~fied~self..so
    sexy~bold

    Invinceable!

    Baby girl
    you made me strong
    had "LH" & me
    all night ..... looonggggg :wink:

    Woman I still feel you
    as if it was the first time
    you guided mental fingers
    slippery wet inside
    your velvet-nessssss

    I think of you and I know
    you knew far more than
    your tender years
    but you can trust
    this old man knows
    you will always be the best
    part of us

    AAA~L

    s
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well, I'm responding ifn nobody else does... this is very very soul-full stuff here Sraheem2. Amazing how we can benefit from finely aged wisdom...even from those whose eyes haven't yet grown dim.

    Speak Poet.

    a
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now i love how u struct this out of heart......nice work poet
     
  4. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    release, brotha.... that's what it's all about after all...right?

    :confused:

    BRB
     
  5. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaay SRaheem2 :wave:

    It's been a minute since I've read you ... and wow ...
    how can I not respond to this ... Sweet Flow!

    Love it!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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