Black Poetry : No Regrets

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unhappy people occupy

    Take to the street multiplied :grouphug:

    Let their demeanor open eyes ~

    Divide and conquer telling lies

    Knee deep in debt owed our lives

    We must persist to free our minds

    Stuff that you use true and tried

    A people free to die...

    Darryl Abdu Omari :thinking:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ peace out
     
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    I like very much. Rhythmic poetry is my favorite.

    It's very quick too. Keep up the good work!
     
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    Thanks AB, you were quick to reply. I love that (Knot Holding Back).

    WELCOME :wave:
     
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    It's a quick read. :)

    Thank you for the welcome.

    You know, this would be nicely performed. It's not only quick but it gets louder and louder until that last sentence. That's also one of my favorite literary techniques. Do you remember what it's called? That whole build up to a finale?
     
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    Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    Truly the pen is mightier... Nicely done.

    (smile)
     
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    AB, I don't know...
    A crescendo, perhaps?
    Thanks again for the ((SHOUT OUT)).
     
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    TotalView, thanks :)
     
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