Black Poetry : No Pretenders

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  1. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    No Pretenders

    How can you smile in my face
    while trying to take my place?
    You trying to get where I'm at
    now you know I can't have that
    When will you realize
    it's time to get your eyes off my prize.
    You're supposed to be my girl
    so why you trying to take over my world
    Well I ain't leaving without a fight
    so you better get your mind right
    Go to bed
    and clear your head
    Get your sh*t together
    and next time come better
    You living a fantasy
    thinking you could be me
    You haven't learned much in life
    if you think you can get me with that knife
    Aiming for my back
    got you all off track
    Use your eyes and see
    that you could never be me
    Your application's been denied
    I don't need you by my side
    But I will give you a guide
    on how to be a real friend
    someone on whom I can depend
    and not a figment of my imagination
    or a pretend friend waiting for the perfect occasion
    to stab me in the back.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true so true! feelin ya vibe here
    let it be heard
    friendz like these are snakes
    tyteeeeeeeee realm
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight, tight, tight! wow.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love this
    tight
    and so true....
     
  5. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    thanx everyone, I thought we all could relate to having fake people around us.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this
    so true indeed
    nice flow
    Peace
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very true....i really like this..
     
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