Black Poetry : No One to Know One...(Iye)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Aug 28, 2003.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Iye,
    Cannot move forward,
    even though I'd like to....
    Iye,
    Cannot move toward,
    even though I try to...
    I can,
    Stay behind,
    and be overwhelmed with desire....
    I can,
    be so blind,
    and pull out to retire.....

    Iye,
    saw a smile but misconceived it for awhile...
    Thinking you wouldn't understand the pain
    like how the sky prolly doesn't understand the rain...(deep)

    Iye,
    played the game,
    and pulled out real quickly....
    Iye,
    still can't maintain,
    as you do so strictly.....
    Iye,
    Can't seem to find a way out of this place....
    Where is the gate to the way out of this place....

    I thought I saw you as a new entity...
    But now You're gone and I'm still searching for a remedy...
    But you've been treating me like I was an enemy...
    I'm there for you but you like All them petty things....

    Iye,
    saw a smile but misconceived for awhile....
    Knowing you wouldn't understand my pain...
    like how the loss doesn't understand the gain.....

    I Guess its useless, I feel useless....
    There's no one to know one,
    I fold son,
    We blew this................................................
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa! dis was awesomeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    love how this played out at the end
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] lurk if ya album is as hot as ya poetry then...heres my money just give me one now lol :)
     
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    LURK!!!!! I missed you!!! What album?? Tell me where it is and I'll buy, or may we sample??? You dropped an awesome bit...


    The Dreamer...
     
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    HEY DREAMWEAVER!!!!

    whats goin' on with ya girl??
    well i have been away for a while because i had to finish
    recording my album.....its a mix of rap and poetry......
    just some real things I've been experiencing.....i dont put it real blatant on tha album cause you know poetry gets complicated....but i drop some insight into my life being young and up until now...you know--still young yet strugglin....
    lookin for tha answers to tha stuff they dont teach you in high school...feel me??
    anyways it was good ta hear from you........we'll be seeing more of each otha.....


    triniti---thanx girl.....I'm gonna post a link soon where you can hear some recent stuff that i do on this other site......some of its real raw and some is just plain real.....thanx for tha love...its headin right back at you!!!!!


    one!!!
     
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    this was so smooth.............

    absolutely smooooooooooooooth!

    luvin it!
     
  7. SeXiAzzMahMi

    SeXiAzzMahMi Banned

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    Wow wow wow WOW!

    U know or maybe u do not know, i am so feeling this...
    it was so so so... wow

    i am truly at a lost for words ...

    so let me do this instead....
    Sam


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  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uppin this.....thanx to all a those who responded and who get what I'm saying.......

    Whatever i write is truly from tha heart...No bs.....



    one love.....
     
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    dude trust me
    i might hurt now
    but ususally what's happens in relationships
    is for da best son...
    learn from it
    and leave it behind...
    tyte scribe...
    hit me up with a promo copy or sumtin...lol
    peace
    khasm
     
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    This was really tight. Something you don't hear much of is a break up from a man's point of view. Thanks for letting us in.