Black Poetry : No one can make me feel like she did

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 11, 2005.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have had me a touch of THC
    I bought into the claim of expanding
    My horizon in my youth you see

    That stuff had its hold on me
    So I understand how it works

    Going ninety miles an hour and standing still :slobber:
    Even drove a few times under its awesome will
    I hear Mary Jane calling me

    She misses me and I miss her
    But I say no because she isn’t fair
    Every time I hold her in hand :spank:
    She leaves traces of her presence in my clothes
    I can’t show up for work with her on my mind :sand:
    The looks you get when you give your time
    It is not them who are paranoid

    I do recall all the laughs we had together
    She would even sneak up on me
    She lingered in my tissue matter
    Those highs were higher than the ones
    I willingly took with her :martian:

    To day I think someone has tainted my girl
    So I steer clear of her no longer in my world

    One day I started this long ago
    I kept her seed in my drawer

    Catch me later in my life… I will be sitting with my girl
    Grown from the seeds of the seventies and eighties
    That is when she was a green pure lady
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see it just don't get any better then u came along
    this was phat !
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think we all have that special One, that's unforgetable
    I feet this song to the upmost, thanks for sharing
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Brother HODEE
    very sweet poem poet
    you are really flowing
    so deep
    I'm just loving it :)

    Peace
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh....this is so s w e e t
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes there is that person, that intoxicates us like a drug....pen on fire I see.
     
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