Black Poetry : No no no no no .....not this

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 17, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i,ve had it...


    :puke:


    i,ve had it...


    :puke:


    I,ve had it ......



    :puke:


    I,m done....



    no.. :bully:
    no.. :bully:


    People twisting story,s ,..
    thinking they can just scream...
    and hurt me like that...
    as if i can take the knocks..
    as if my heart can take it..
    as if these tears are faking...
    as if i,m dramatising it more than it is... :hearthis:


    i always said this what is good it good...
    what is bad is bad...

    i count my blessings ..
    leave that up to me....

    Dont even go by the words of....

    "'you pick the wrong guys..""

    as if i,m walking in the streets and choose Mister with "'wrong"" on his fore head""


    As if i can scan People...
    as if i know everything..


    I feel a lot.....
    that doesnt make me feel everything right..




    YEAH!...




    and as if i have """well you know i believe in jezus christ so i forgive........


    so HIT ME ""





    jeee....



    I had it.... :hearthis:


    I HAD IT..... :hearthis:


    If you cant handle what you see... :kiss1:


    than leave.....




    leave....




    Yeah jeee!


    But dont blLash youre dirt ..on me..... :bully:

    if there is a Problem ""TALK TO ME'''


    get deep.....




    I Had it.......



    I had it....




    All those beautifull big words....... :hearthis:
    but not living at it..

    Who told you to say these words ?
    Did i ask for it when they are fake ?





    I,m you,re soulmate ....Bla Bla ..

    I never leave you... Bla Bla...

    I like you mmm Yes ...i noticed....



    Common now Stop this...


    thats waisting time ...
    bulllife....






    here is another one......


    ""Youre hurting yourself "'


    Oh our lord ..... (cause its not "'Oh my lord'")


    oh our lord...


    I know when i hurt myself....

    Common now.....
    common now.....



    I,ve had it .....

    :puke:

    here commes another one...



    "'Dont let everything in ..and you have to become harder""

    "'youre heart is to soft ""' "''make a wall or sumthing .....you can controle it""

    Ononononono...wait ..this one...


    "'youre to sensitive.."'


    On now i,m "'to"" sensitive"''



    wellll...mmmm Yeah i have a strong feeling at times that i,m living in hard time..and living in a world were i dont fit in...
    because its getting so....mmm

    mmm

    so mmm

    (yeah its ugly but i,m getting more and more sarcatic here in this poem verry ugly....maybe there are some evil seeds people planted that are starting to grow...)


    soo.....



    so...



    HARD...




    So yeah ...youre maybe right ....









    oh..Our lord......


    and i thought that that red moving thing under my chest was soft .....?


    Well can we make an appointment than so that you can fix it....?

    you know make it a little harder....

    unsensitive....


    if you can do that ....
    you know do it for me than ...
    sinds i can..

    NOT....



    You know turn me into a Robot..

    Yeah let me join the westernmodernasation..



    Aww ...

    she used to be so.....


    funny........


    and so..

    kind......


    and so...


    forgivable...


    and so..



    stimulating...


    and so...




    OPEN!...



    and so...



    concerning....






    full of love.....



    use to talk with all kinds of people ....



    she is a mole now...


    i just wonder how come........?















    did i do That ? :pc: :bully:












    naw....








    ""she did this all to herself....."'


    "'all to herself"'










    right........
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL WELL ~
    i hear ya on dis one did it not me ...
    flow on
     
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    ah sis...you are really flowing a release
    in this poem
    much love to you
    flow it ..bring it
    release it


    Blue
     
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    There is so much depth and drama between these lines. One would have to read carefully to grasp it and I enjoyed every line....I also love the humor you mixed in with the "drama". Gurl, you really laid this one out with a lot of thought. Thank you so much for sharing a piece of your life (at that moment) with lil ole me. :hearts4:
     
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    Long live Lady Liberty, Happy Birthday!!!