Black Poetry : no name yet....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soft whispers in da night….
    Laid wit a rose…..
    As you enter in my dream
    --------------------------------BUT NOW
    to justify
    What you mean to me…..
    the
    sun rise after the
    rain fall….looking over the plain
    as the breeze blows….
    The morning flower
    Awakes as you touch my soul…..
    that one star that I know
    love me for me
    as our spirits play
    in the skies of love....
    are minds lock....
    i feel you .....as
    when the moon glows
    I feel your heart beat…
    When it rains I feel your pain…
    But when the sun is in bloom
    I feel your joy…..
    something you posed
    i give back
    unconditionally.....
    as you laid the rose….
    you spoke vows of
    your love I hold dear….
    I know your near….
    i do not fear.....
    As I close my eyez at night…
    My dreams leads me in your light
    I hear your whispers callin.....
    Floatin thru the air…my wings begin to
    open as you embrace me...

    I adore you
    My Protector
    My King
    My Love
    You complete me….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whispers in da dark
    dis leaks so sweet
    from ya lips da whispers

    very nice lovin da sweetness
    dripping from dis piece here
    wow!!!!!
     
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    Beautiful

    Beautiful post mzblkangel.... loves in the air
     
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    Yes, this was truly wonderful.

    Completion is a beautiful thing.
     
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    love injected
    tytely respected
    one love
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad ya like the sweetness
    as it drips....
    i like how ya worded you reply
    fits my poem maybe even a name for it...much love....Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz..love ya support and love given much love...:angel1:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i
    messed up on the first reply so everyone
    get there on personal thankz....

    thankz for da support means alot....Angel
     
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