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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, May 27, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    any ideals???

    Up down and around
    Two steps Backwards
    Only one forward
    Which way
    Wake me up out of this dream
    Screamin for my PEACE

    It’s like a curse that has wrap itself
    Killing me slowly….
    Invading the mind
    Chokes the heart
    Crushing the spirit
    Evil lurks…. and takes the soul
    Silent cries at night….
    Can’t see the light
    As the wind blows…
    Seems grace fold too
    The skies turn gray
    And a blue cold come about
    The pain gets heavy
    My feet stand firm
    But this battle……..

    Stop!!!!!!

    Sending it up
    Sent it up…..
    So it maybe heal
    My feet was on sinkin sand
    As I walk this weary earth
    On borrowed time…
    Do you mine
    I got a story to tell
    Thinking it was no end
    But….
    Sending it up
    Sent it up………
    This battle is no longer mine….
    As all my sadness wipes away
    My fears disappear
    The pain lifted…
    I feel free..
    ………so free
    A new day
    Is mine…
    A new start
    .V
    ….I
    …...C
    ……..T
    ……….O
    ………...R
    ………….Y
    Is mine
    As I soar on high
    I yell His name in grace
    He didn’t pass me by….
    He took my battle and
    He'll take yours too..
    See....
    He took my hand
    ……………my hand
    And walk with me….
    …………..walk with me
    Lead me through the storm
    ……………storm
    And healed my soul
    My my soul
    My spirit
    Yes He did!!!!!

    (C)2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Victory be yours saint Da Lord
    very well expressed
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would say, "He Took My Battle."

    Girl, this is beautiful. Just bomb.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the name gempis suggested...fits very well. lovely job on this piece
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had to dig this piece up thank you so much for sharing it.
     
  6. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "As i walk this weary earth,
    On borrowed time"

    those lines will make a dumb man speak sense, and a bird question air, good points made her sistah, the whole scribe was twisting and turning me and i'm just enjoying the whole feel of it.................just....no words for it......just........enjoying the whole feel of it..........peace :grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    these are some great titles to call this awesome powerful piece
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Embrace victory, child, it is your birthright!

    Thanks for sharing such joy. :hi:
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Tis always a blessing and our due
    to give praise to the CREATOR
    as you do......
     
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