Black Poetry : no name (needs one) pt 1&2 with a title

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ANEW LOVE embracing as that moment became

    Through the horizon
    of a new day
    A love have been born
    Within the heavens
    I laid back and enjoyed the ride
    He had me spinning
    Feelin as I can float on air…..

    See you aint feeling me….

    He took me in his arms
    And held me
    Like no end…..
    Touched my soul
    And laid peace upon my
    heart….graced me in pleasure
    and filled my lonely void….
    And enhanced my being…..
    As the sea calm
    His soul took me within
    Yesterday sun set
    As the moon awaken
    ..for a new day to be born
    As I laid in his arms…
    Wrap in his warmth
    as he claimed my mental
    sent me straight to heaven…
    For this moment became….

    second part

    Within the winds he
    calls my name..
    for that moment
    I reached into my soul
    And gave my spirit
    With only a mental touch
    Within my dream of dreams
    never knew it could
    feel so good

    See you aint feeling me….

    it is the divine peace
    that completes me...
    as we laid in our chambers
    my body lets go
    within time as we sail
    thur the orbs and
    ova the rainbow an up
    the stairwells of love..
    Taken my breath
    A perfect perfection
    As the passion is release…
    as this moment became

    my heart spells his name..
    with each beat like mores code
    defining each syllable…as
    my soul calls and his spirit pulls
    as we interlace in our mental.
    time stops and the heavens move...
    angels sing....he took my
    soul and released my pain...
    as my being feels his rapture
    feelin the bliss of he
    reachin outwards as we
    interlace and fold…
    my body lets go
    as this moment became
    a new day was born….
    Within the night as
    we sung upon the heavens
    and dance on the clouds
    as the starz gleamed….
    as this moment became….

    Ya feel me now?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow......very nice seem like love has hit here
    u gotta name it soon !
    sound like a (NEW LOVE EMBRACING )
    scribe on sistah poetess............................
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww yeah, waitin for the next part, sis, cause this one is hot
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Name? We don't need no stinking name.... :new: LOL
    This was nice angel real nice.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam...
    hope yall like the second
    part as much as the
    the first
    $RICH$$ check out the name
    cool :coffee:

    Peace
    yall
    Angel
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    intimate. very intimate. you pain a beautiful picture.
    kind'a takes a brutha away, for split second, away, away, away....
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright!

    Go MBA...THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!
    Luvin this...
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    klabarron and Nita
    thanks for the love and support
    happy you enjoyed
    Peace yall
    Angel
     
  9. Khasm13

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    very nice...
    i felt those....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very touching scribe, definitely heartfelt.
     
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