Black Poetry : No More?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Feb 18, 2005.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shakes shivers
    Heartaches with every beat

    Cold sweats, late night
    This body never sleeps

    Tossing and Turning
    Replaying your words, No

    Unclenched my hands
    But my heart wont let go

    You’ve tied into my soul
    Made sadness my reality

    Destiny is not all what it seemed
    Loneliness! the light that’s apparent to me

    Next to you in the physical
    But, your heart is so far away

    Engulfed in darkness
    You’ve stolen my day!

    A taste that stains my soul
    Im a junkie on a drug called you

    Fiendishly searching like and attic
    I cant believe we’re through

    A train wreck from withdrawal
    Rehab seems so far away

    No morning after pill
    To wipe this feeling away

    No advice
    That'll make this any better

    No easing or soothing
    Will get me through the strormy weather

    No sign of change
    Or any Opening doors

    No cure for my addiction
    Your No More.
     
  2. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey baby naujae is back that is a nice piece i've being writing mysyself
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop indeed flow on
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa! A poetic masterpiece with not only a heartfelt message but a tight tight flow. Well done, poet.
     
  5. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks poets for the read
    much appreciated
     
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    this was an emotionally dark piece....that made u read it till da end
    tyte write son...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this had a dark heavy cloud on it very nicely posed....
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful my brotha!
    heartfelt indeed! :terrific:
     
  9. queentswana

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    There's good in everything, and in your case, you do have "Time" on your side...
    time ...to heal
    time ...to laugh again
    time ...to again "love"
    I love this piece poet, this road gets used quite often.
     
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