Black Poetry : no more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Nov 25, 2002.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no more you
    no more lies ....
    no more crying eyes....
    no more manipulation...
    no more molistation...
    no more dark places or changing faces

    no more victimization
    you played youre game as a victem

    well the name of this day is Victory
    and my name is Victoria
    cause when it comes to Gods love
    you loose......

    no more beautifull words
    that has no action
    no more distraction
    with youre seductive lextion...

    she walks away from the tree
    she looks back for one last time and says..

    You self absorbed!
    self centred!
    self conceited!
    self containded!
    self contradictory!
    self defeating!
    self indulgent!
    self interested !

    selfish!

    SNAKE!..............
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    sweet_journey Member MEMBER

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    Sweetheart, you don't even know on what level my past relationship can relate to this poem. Excellent job!!
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    relationship?........i,m talking about the the devil.....here you know
    the snake in the tree ......genisis.....
    but hey this is poetry...........thanks enyway for responding
    somethimes no one responds ..on the poems that i thought where nice but i,m not the only one............i already reseaved a email of desthee.....on how many good poems past by and no one responded
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so thanks sweet journey......for responding .that was sweet

    but youre name already says it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    selfishness is da loosers game ......nice vibe
     
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    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i get it when you say is about the devil, cuz we all kno that he is all of those things and more.
     
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