Quiet Poetry Lounge : No More Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jan 15, 2008.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love was a song
    That I once sung
    And the Angels was my chorus
    My heart was the conductor of
    The vibes,
    it center around my emotions
    And nothing seem hopeless
    And everything was possible
    Like a fairy tale story
    But now
    I'm off key, and playing with no beat
    Love is gone.
    No more song

    The sun was the warmth
    That awaken my craving
    to see you again and again
    It created the dial
    that produce my smile
    Now it's
    no longer shine
    in my direction
    Is it because
    love is gone?
    Love is gone.
    No more song

    Romance once spilled into
    Our whispers of desire,
    That produce a fire that
    Seem to burn endlessly
    And just like the ticking of the clock
    Reality Tick Tock showed me
    That time held all the answer.
    It took time for me to see
    You never had love for me.
    Awaken by the alarm
    Seeing what have always been before me.
    Nothing
    Nothing
    Nothing
    The light once gleam into
    A spectrum of brilliant colors
    And the rainbow was my halo
    Removing the Rose color glasses
    I now see how we have faded
    Into A shade of gray
    And there is no tomorrow.

    The love is gone
    The throne now bears
    Yet I don't have the heart to cry.
    And I don't know why.
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Blue Water
    I don't know what to say
    I would love to hear you read this
    It was a sad felt poem
    But it was beautiful in emotion
    I did Love it
    Flow on Poet Blue Water
    ~Bless~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The song is no more as love close to blind eyes
    this piece hit me as i looked back to what was and gone
    deep sad yet delightful scribe sis.
     
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    Wow! It seems we went from Chocolate in December to Love Lost in January! I'm feeling this my sistah!
     
  5. Bluewater

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    Hey Sister PLATINUMILLITY1
    Thank you for the love on my drop,
    Friday Throw Down is the spot
    to be. I'm glad you loved it.
    And glad you peep this out.
    Thank you for the love

    Hey $$RICH$$
    Yeah, Love has a blind side
    So I will move into the light
    out of
    the shadows
    So now I can do me.
    And that's what's up
    Thank you my brother for the love

    Hey HopelisRomantic
    lol..yeah I'm just a fruit basket.
    Love isn't lost.
    Just misplaced for the moment.
    And still the flow goes on.
    Thank yo so much for the love

    Thank you so much poets for the love
    and thoughts you have share on my flow

    Peace~N~Love
     
  6. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    wow... gave me chills girl..

    I'm sitting here reading it.. nodding up and down saying.. "yup, thatz what it feel like".....

    way to grab emotions... this is deep and on the money!
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Miss Lady
    Thank you sis...lol
    I just got caught in a zone.
    And I'm readying myself for a lane change.:car:
    Thank you for sharing your love
    and thoughts on this drop my sister.

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The beauty in your expression is just as clear as the pain in this piece, not an easy balance in writing, but you've done just that. Posed on point, with a sigh.
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey SIster Wazi.
    Thank you so much for your love on this drop.
    The release is always in the flow.
    So I'm moving on..
    Thank you somuch for the LOVE

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    ya know its time to be moving along, when you can't cry no tears! hee,hee,hee...

    i felt this one, it was right in the ball park for me! lovely

    DS
     
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