Black Poetry : NO MORE REASON TO LOVE YOU

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  1. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NO MORE REASON, FOR YOU, TO CALL ME A BITC#
    NO MORE REASON, FOR YOU TO LOOK AT ME WITH CONTEMPT
    MO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO DESIRE YOUR D%CK
    NO MORE REASON, FOR YOU TO TRY AND FLIP THIS SCRIPT


    NO MORE REASON, FOR US TO TRY
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO CRY
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO STAND BY YOUR SIDE
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO JUSTIFY YOU WITH AND AN ALIBI

    NO MORE REASON, FOR YOUR DIRTY STARES
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO PLAY FAIR
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO SHARE
    NO MORE REASON, BECAUSE I JUST DON'T CARE

    NO MORE REASON, FOR YOU TO MAKE DEMANDS
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO UNDERSTAND
    NO MORE REASON, FOR YOU TO DENY ME AS YOUR WOMAN
    NO MORE REASON, BECAUSE YOU ARE NO LONGER MY MAN

    NO MORE REASON, FOR US, TO CONTINUE THIS GAME
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME, TO PRAY THING WILL CHANGE
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME, TO BE ASHAME
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME, TO HOLD ON, TO YOUR LAST NAME

    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO BE VICTIMIZE
    NO MORE REASON, FOR YOU TO CRITICIZE
    NO MORE REASON, FOR ME TO LIVE THIS LIE
    NO MORE REASON, BECAUSE I'VE FINALLY REALIZE

    THAT I DON’T NEED

    ANYMORE REASON,TO BE WITH YOU

    ANYMORE REASON, TO CONTINUE TO DO

    ANYMORE REASONS,FOR YOU TO ACT LIKE, YOU NEVER KNEW

    THAT YOU NEVER, EVER GAVE ME ONE REASON,
    TO STAY IN LOVE WITH YOU


    © Copyright 2004 by FINDLOVEINME
     
  2. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    nice drop. but you may have over done it with the "NO MORE REASON" repartitions

    still,i liked it.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya on dis here tyte forward drop
     
  4. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was reason for me to repeat (no more reason) as repetitious as it may seem to some, it's just a reflection of how redundant our lives can become when it is filled with everyday sadness, everyday abuse and everyday tragedy.

    Thanks for the replies
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you brought this, you pounded this impression home, some scribes are just forceful because that is the intent.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yet another wonderful piece...I enjoyed reading this very much...as I do all your writtings. thanks for sharing part of your life.
     
  7. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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  8. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU ARE WELCOME ( WHO ~IS~SHE), AND THANK YOU FOR YOU HONESTY
     
  9. Eric Mitchell

    Eric Mitchell Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm sitting here in awe trying to find the words to describe the liberating power in this piece. Girl, you got skills.
     
  10. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ERIC MITCHELL, THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT.

    I WOULD LIKE TO THANK EVERYONE WHO TAKES THE TIME TO READ MY PIECES, MUCH LOVE GOES OUT TO ALL
     
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