Quiet Poetry Lounge : No Mo'

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A time to reap, and a time to sew
    No strength in my body
    No reason to grow

    No bills to pay, no nothing, to show
    No house, no car
    No money to blow

    No water to flow
    No green meaning go
    No light, in my eyes
    No life, no mo'

    No way, no how
    Not now, not then
    Not here, not there
    Not why, not when

    Not ever, again
    Not you, not me
    Domestic abuse
    Will not see me

    Will not see me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed .....very well pose'd
     
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    Very raw drop!
    Loved it!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowing right onto the page, no more hurt, no more pain, peace in that valley on earth. Feeling this, keep writing.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no mo' time for the drama to hit the flo' and ya flames just keep on goin sista :deal:
     
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    !!!!

    Powerful in both content and simplicity. Very well done.