Black Poetry : NO MO' (inspired by Sista Steele)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NINI69, Jan 23, 2003.

  1. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NO MO' SEX NO MO' LICKIN
    NO MO' SUCKIN AND NO MO' F-CKIN
    NO LONGER WILL RELATIONSHIP GLITCHES
    BE REPLACED WITH QUICK SEX FIXES
    I KNOW THAT "HE" IS OUT THERE
    A MAN FOR ME A MAN WHO CARES
    ENOUGH TO GET TO KNOW ME
    TO SPEND TIME TO GROW WE
    INTO AN ACTUAL RELATIONSHIP
    REMEMBER WHEN ALL WE DID WAS KISS
    SUSPENDED IN ECTSASY BUT INNOCENT
    KNOW MY BIRTHDAY, KNOW MY SIGN AND MY FULL NAME
    KNOW SOMETHING BEFORE YOU TRY TO COME/CAME
    INSIDE OF ME EVEN THE BLIND CAN SEE
    YOU CAN'T MAINTAIN SOLELY SEXUALLY
    BUT STILL WE PRESS ON - HOPING
    THE FROG WILL BECOME A PRINCE
    HE'S JUST ON BONE CONSIDER THIS
    MY PRICE IS FAR ABOVE RUBIES
    BUT IF I DON'T VALUE MYSELF
    I CAN'T EXPECT YOU TO DO THESE
    SO, NO MO' SEX NO MO' LICKIN
    NO MO' SUCKIN AND NO MO' F-CKIN
    MAYBE I'LL HAVE CHANGED LUCK WHEN
    I PLACE ME ABOVE ALL ELSE
    WHEN I CEASE TO SHARE MY WEALTH
    I AM THE SUM TOTAL OF VARIOUS PARTS
    SEDUCE MY MIND WIN MY HEART
    TAKE ME OUT AND WOO ME
    DON'T AUTOMATICALLY TRY TO DO ME
    SHOW ME WHO YOU ARE INSIDE
    SELF RESPECT AND A SENSE OF PRIDE
    IS WHAT I HAVE AND NOW LOOK FOR
    BEFORE I TURN OFF THE LIGHTS AND CLOSE THE DOOR
    PEACE!

    ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY NINI69/TBW 2003
     
  2. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICELY VERBALIZED. Your value is the sum of all your parts
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done u sum it up to perfection
     
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    I am with ya! Celibacy or bust...

    I like how you laid out those words how you came so correct about a subject that we often neglect, self respect, we can scribe about the wicked nasty, and how we like it done...but when it comes down to the real...we all want sex to be more than just FUN...I am on board for the 2003, no more extracurricular nookie for me! Keeping my jewels in lock down you see, until the King comes with the key! Oh , it's not the first time I have claimed my second virginity, and it didn't go on for infinity. It lasted 18 months for me til a lover came and convinced me, that he was the one for me...loved me good yes he did...but he was not the King that held the key...and so I had to set him free. I wait and work with my heart on pause and study my words for a more important cause. I give you your props and a loud applause...
    Love ya scribe and that's no lie!

    Blessings on Ya House!
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt you on this one Losts of emotion here...
     
  6. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU

    UL820, MSLUSCIOUSB, $$RICH$$ AND LAST BUT NEVER LEAST BLKTHUNDER,

    THANK YOU FOR THE READ, THE PROPS AND APPLAUSE WHICH I MUST IN TURN SHARE WITH SISTA STEELE. READING AND FEELING HER POEM IS WHAT INSPIRED ME TO WRITE THIS. PEACE!
     
  7. Sista Steele

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    I don't know what to say... (cheesin extra hard this morning)

    Nini, this flowed so well! Especially the last line...wrapped the whole poem up so smooth. I'm honered to say the least because I feel like I'm a newbe at this wonderful thing called scribing. You have made my morning! Thank you.
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mslb, your flow is HOT...
     
  9. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SISTA STEELE.............

    I AM VERY PLEASED THAT YOU ENJOYED MY PIECE. THE WORDS BEGAN TO COME TO ME WHILE READING YOURS. IT WAS TRUE INSPIRATION. KEEP ON DOIN WHAT YOU ARE DOIN. PEACE!
     
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