Black Poetry : No Milk In My Coffee Please

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by freedomspeaks, May 28, 2004.

  1. freedomspeaks

    freedomspeaks Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 28, 2004
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    "Yes, may I help you ma'am?"

    "Yes, may I had some coffee crammed
    No milk just black like I am
    Shuck but not stirred, it take away the fam
    Boiled but not cooked, it really don't matter what brand
    Elusive and touch by game
    But hooked and fixed by a man
    From the African land
    Do you understand?

    You see, I don't think you do
    I have traveled miles afar for this coffee and a cup won't do
    I got to have a mug with steam overdue
    Did I happen to mention no milk....or nothin' new
    I just want mine's black its the only way boo
    Few
    Who
    Came across didn't understand so I got to tell you
    He who puts sugar or milk in my brew
    Might have to come up fighting for his crew
    I gots to have some today....it's just long overdue
    Black Coffee is nothin' new

    I have traveled miles through ancient riens and monuments
    Just to get my coffee and it's compliments
    It's texture and regiments
    Because it compliments
    Right good and dandy to my stomach's measurements

    I rode the subways
    Walked the streets in different ways
    Doing everything from simon says
    To dismays
    So you got to do what I say

    Coffee shuck not stirred
    No milk it sounds upsurb
    I ain't no nerd
    I don't need glasses to tell you when you're wrong in this word
    Don't tell me you have never heard
    Of plain on this side of the world
    I'm just a girl
    But I have traveled a long way just to flirt
    With somebody who could understand everything I'm saying, you heard?

    Coffee no milk please
    I need the richness
    of it's blackness
    To make my release
    No oil or grease
    Just the coffee please
    To make my release
    What was that? Oh, no sir I don't need bread or yeast
    I just need my coffee please
    To make my release

    Black on my stomach
    Black all over dammit
    You asked so I said it
    When I said I meant it
    No hyphin' or nothin'......don't **** me
    I need my coffee black or I'll steal it
    So I can savor it
    Threw my throat all the way down, never neglected
    Just give me my coffee man, so I can swallow it
    Savor it
    And gallow it
    Down to my stomach
    You dig it?

    The power of a mug of black coffee
    Does so much wonders for me
    This liquid substance is meant for me
    And I would be [email protected] if I would go out the family
    For some milky ****, named Billy
    I need someone named Haseem or Jaheim for me
    You got me?
    I know what I'm saying might be silly
    But I'm lookin' at you and you fit the description lovely
    Are you ready to fill this order willingly
    Cause I have traveled from afar just for some of that black lovin'!!!!!!!!!!!"
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    wooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeee!
    nuffin lik blk lovin ummmmmm!!
    dis was on point gotta get me a cup
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    nice drop indeed
    tight
     
  4. freedomspeaks

    freedomspeaks Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 28, 2004
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Thank you so much. I just had to post this one.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    You want what you want, and you're not having any substitutions. I like the way you flowed this, and the props to the brothers within.
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 24, 2004
    Messages:
    7,007
    Likes Received:
    160
    Occupation:
    day care provider (own business)
    Location:
    Brick City
    Ratings:
    +161
    I will never put cream in my coffee again ...*whew* my, my..*smh* and humming ..."gonn get me a hot mug of black coffee and love me a black man ...all night long :wink:
    thanks for the nice piece and welcome to the house of luv.
     
  7. freedomspeaks

    freedomspeaks Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 28, 2004
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Yo, thanks so much ladies. I'm glad ya'll was feelin' it out there. :thanks: watz and queent. Thanks for the luv.
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    I love black coffee
    Although sometimes it burns me
    The burn will heal in time and release from me
    Black coffee is part of me!!!!!!
     
  9. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2003
    Messages:
    308
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Designer, student
    Location:
    Mo. City Tx/ Houston
    Ratings:
    +1
    fo sho
    i feel u on da black blast there
    i gotta have me some
    i just can't do it no other way
    it just don't feel right for me
     
  10. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    Man!!!1 You flowed with this one:bowdown: I loved it
     
Loading...