Black Poetry : NO .....makes them GO ADO....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Sep 22, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi fam i,m so sick and tired of this ....
    and i wrote this piece after a guys called on tha streets and i didnt respond
    normaly i do ask whats up or can i help you ..but this time i said no..
    and walked on....its about rejection wich is never nice.......but this is
    just bull..and i finaly got tha chance to put some things of my chest...
    of some sistuation ...


    Once they hear no, some bro's they put on the diss and say "H...........O"

    Interdiction on lady cruise....
    let the cat get drunk get drunk by her own milk
    don't let her get involved with your mystical blues
    cause she outs you on interlude with her frolic mood
    she ain't fretful
    she ain't blue

    I wanted to frutify her
    but she don't want it.
    She didn't want me
    give her frothy now
    let her go miauw miauw
    she must have had
    many depredations in the soldiers heart...
    let her suffer now, make her suffer, I wanna see some tears
    I know she has them
    give her depressant by giving her a little nod.
    Don't let her deplume you
    with her and her God
    she makes me dither with her documentation
    Jezus as her friend, Christ as her cornerstone
    and God as her co-signatory

    Now, what brother wanna have that!!!
    you wanna sneak out somethimes don't you?
    Have a look at her, makes you loose your mind
    to have a talk with her feels like go steady
    a day with her feels like engagement
    will feel like you're married,
    and your wedding day as a funeral of your sins
    and a divorce will make you feel like you're dying...

    so She must be the devil....

    I hate her for not loving me that way:censored:

    I hate her :censored:
    diss her :censored:

    ignore her:censored:
    think she is all that :censored:
    I hope she will feel the same one day...:censored:

    Now bro, what's your problem? :confused:

    you see guys, you know what I'm saying 'there she goes'! :censored:

    I know what you're saying.....
    I hear what you're saying......

    I hear ya....

    Now what's your problem?

    The problem is you B_I_T_C_H_!


    mmm..........




    When there is love....

    there shouldn't be no problem.......
















    That's the problem
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well expressed for one to stand and speak od such should know da meaning
    much love to u dear Queen lady !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well spoken...nice drop
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I:heart: you rich.... :)

    i :heart: ya sis... :kiss:


    thanks for tha read and understanding :grouphuge:



    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    Well Well
    This was deep Sister
    I see sometimes fellas get mad
    When a woman wont talk
    I think that if fellas had a different approach
    I think things would go different
    I usually say hello wave-Give that look
    Some come back some dont but in the end
    Its love-Some guys rush things too quickly
    This off the subject of the thread but...
    All brothers need to slow down
    Realize woman dont want to marry you the next day
    When I say marriage I mean settle down right then
    Everyone has indescretions I would hope as society changes
    Some brothers change to-Respect for our Queens
    Unifies our society believe!!!
     
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    hee hee hee.... well well well.... this is a trueness... don't let no one hold you down... fa real sis.... man, u really right with this one... u r most respected ....just so that you know... i'm really feeling u on this.... yea
    Jesus is my man
    and holds the keys to my temple
    Let his light shine through
    and say God Bless U
    Jesus Loves U

    ... just beautiful... D.S.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise love u back even more sis...
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all i can say is wow or whoa you got it going on flow on poet.
     
  9. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol......

    i wrote this one a while ago .....

    thanks dear fam:heart:


    but i experiance it still....
    and before there where some scary moments and
    i have had some not nice experiances...

    but now i am not scared anymore


    cause i have king jezus walking next to me...






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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