Black Poetry : No Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Nov 27, 2003.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I won’t touch your back,
    Even if you touch mine,
    As gratifying and as satisfying the shivers may be,
    Routing up my spine.
    Because in my soul,
    My emotions haven’t been consoled.
    It hasn’t been enough time,
    Since I allowed myself and my heart to be intertwined,
    With someone else’s,
    And prove that someone made me whole.
    If you press your lips against my own,
    They will stay firmly pressed together,
    Not shaken by your attempts to make me moan in pleasure.
    Or by the fact
    That soft lips, your lips, saw me suitable for contact.
    If you wrap your arms tightly around my waist,
    And try to gaze at me ‘tenderly’ in the face,
    Hoping that other actions would just fall into place,
    The rest of the script, I would just have to erase.
    If you open your mouth to utter words drenched in sweet,
    That were intended to sweep me off of my feet,
    My finger will gently press against your lips,
    So that your sentences will remain incomplete.
    If you run your hands over my flesh,
    In order to study the outline of my body,
    My hands of course, will run with you,
    But only to guide yours away from me.
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl I love this, and I hear where ya comin from. nice drop.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this drop
    much love to you
    let the flow release
    Peace
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice.

    One of the things I dread the most is affection not returned.

    That speaks louder than any shouted words.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you on this i so agree with PositiveMindset :angel1:
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *whoa*

    :driveby: *picking my eyes up*
    excuse me, while l throw in his towel...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, those feelings are crystal, don't even try it. Like the way you put this together
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome sister.......i hope to read more from you cause .....I FeLd this Piece


    i know the feeling :(



    i agree with jhia :) ...this piece hit me in the eye...



    Love liberty
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Officially Blown Away

    Now this was a flavor I could never grow tired of reading...

    Please........
    ...............Grace us with more!


    This was Phenomenal!
    Loving your work!
     
  10. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey thanks guys..........I could feel you feeling me, poetically..........don't stop

    Much respect
     
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