Black Poetry : NO LOVE LOST

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Our love been like a scale
    to blance out but u wanna bail
    only to make me noise dive
    all this like fallen into hell

    I've hunger for your love oh' so long
    what we could have woulda been strong
    building a love dat was our very own
    yet u change all that wit a massive tone

    U said that u do
    but today i feel dat we through
    a heap of lies, don't know when ya true
    all balled up in a phase without a clue

    I was willing to share everything i had
    but sour notes made this tune go bad
    now this weight in on my head
    by da choices u made instead

    U stole my heart while i was blind
    took my love made it a crime
    now inside deeply i'm dying
    from this crash ur never was mine

    Go head run , have ya fun
    but on da end ur be da one
    who will cry and die inside
    by da pain flicked from another man

    Holla !!!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O, the realization that what was can never be

    ...leaves us hoping against hope, praying for the strength the cope. nicely done, $$RICHMAN$$
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat , sometime we forget on our way out what we might be letting in !
    big thankz brother Baller...........
     
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    nicely done really enjoyed it could feel the pain in this write....
     
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    it amaze me how one can not love and betray out of selfishness and greed
    life too short to waste time on a lier / cheater that make u say no love lost
    we all getto smile another day !

    Thankz for feelin me here .
     
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    this was nicely done bro. $$rich$$. Totally felt the pain between the lines. Can't say I haven't been there a time or two.
     
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    thankz sis it hurts when we give our all and be played.
     
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