Black Poetry : NO LONGER THE DANCE I KNOW;ONLY *****

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  1. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    NO LONGER THE DANCE I KNOW ;ONLY *****

    O dance what gone wrong with U?
    A stranger in my own house am i;
    Only years that i left thee;
    And now my eyes, i can't believe;

    "cuz ya shape and style again i know not;
    That if U dance and *** shakes not;
    Then U know not how to;
    O dance what went wrong?

    Lord if her *** shoots not out of her pants;
    Then she knows not how to;
    Even my baby girl kid, aged 3;
    I say dance for me;

    And behold ,she shakes her little ***;
    O dance see what u've done to me;
    Chingy,till u make it Right Thuur;
    Then u know not how to;

    Tell me now what went wrong;
    O J.Lo,Mystical,P.DD,Lil'l kim;
    Tell me why,O Nelly,Ashanti;
    Why not the legs,arms and belly?

    But ya ***,Obie Trice,Snoop Dog;
    Pharell,Paul,Even ya head can do it better;
    And Jay-z,50Cent;PIMP,w-h-y,why?
    Ya sweet ladies ,almost stripped're they;

    Lord come down now,i can't believe;
    Jessey Jackson 'n M.Jackson ask them;
    M.Luther king,is this what u taught us?
    Forgive me cuz a thing i forgot;

    Freedom and liberty it's all about;
    OOh forgive me then,yet i ask why?
    O Busta Rhymes,Mya,I wanna know;
    Why spoil my baby kid?

    And if the *** vibrates not ;
    Like the strings of my guitar;
    Then she knows not how to;
    Ooh Christina Aguillera why this?

    That if ya body twists not like a snake;
    Then u know not how to;O Shakira;
    I wanna know from u, why this?
    And now Beyonce just started,why too?

    If everybody comes not to Hollywood;
    To see how she strips,O lord;
    Then Madonna says you know not how to;
    Ooh come 'n see for yourselves now, she cries;

    Baby girls shake ya body now;
    but tempt u not me,i'm affraid;
    Cuz the prize will be yours;
    Ooh even worst now,the ***'s boiling.
     
  2. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    *** REPRESENTS BUDS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flow dis was off da hook .....i like
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some one here is :mad: for you writting this piece ....

    but its not me......o ,no i just become quit for reading this....Because of truth maybe..


    ha ha it the D.......he wont like it...


    and i,m glad you wrote it.....and it takes strength to do that





    Love l
     
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    Tell it like it is!

    You speak truth
    And truth needs to be spoken
    Cause all of the moral codes are
    soon to be broken
    They taking our lil girls as tokens
    And soon like used up Barbies
    they will lie used up and broken.
    Forsaking the beauty to deliver
    the lust!
    I watch them, but I two step and
    shake my head in disgust!
    Now mind you I had my day to shake
    mine...But then mine was not a lil girls
    behind...Now we got pedaphiles and
    sex offender's galore...and every time
    you pick up a cd at the record store
    you get more of the *** shakin
    Let there be no mistaken...
    We have sunk to an all time low,
    now we have no where else to go!
    Oprah doing the bootie shake on her show...Lawd have mercy I can't take no more. I got a grandaughter and three lil nieces...I wonder if Nelly gonna break them off some pieces?
    For ruining their minds while they shaking behinds...read between the lines...SEX SELLS!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so on point...

    I nearly choked when I saw the Ludacris video P-poppin...

    If you haven't seen this one...then believe me it can't get
    any worse...this is the most suggestively, lude
    display of using sex to sell your album that I've ever seen
    this video would cause R.Kelly to digress
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece Mac.. Very nice
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dude you are so right...

    on my travels down south
    i saw some ish dat bugged my eyes out...
    phat @sses break'n glasses
    jiggle'n on da dance floor
    while hype'd cats are behind them wiggle'n
    and pump'n till their private's sore
    when did dance'n become so hardcore
    skip a dance step
    cause your @ss will be shown da door
    you gotta shake what ya momma gave ya
    nevermind your ill behavior
    pop dat p***y
    like you won't have the chance later
    if you don't you must be crazy
    so...
    jiggle it baby
    go head baby
    jiggle it baby
    yeah, go head baby....

    supa tyte write...
    way to get a brother inspired...
    and great point too...
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. Envy

    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You speak all truth that is most obvious but most ignored as if its nothing.
     
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