Quiet Poetry Lounge : No Longer the Blind One

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CreativeExpress, Mar 16, 2004.

  1. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    The pain of your lies, the sting of untruth. I've left that behind, no longer the blind one. You can't even accept, your part in our demise, and still u stare in my face and tell me sweet, sweet lies, but it's you who looks foolish for I'm no longer the blind one. Laid down my heart, ready to surrender, and give myself to you. But memories of your ill-treatment, as fresh as an open wound, staying this way makes me no longer the blind one. Where do you get off, invading my new space with promises of change, that you won't hurt me no more. Too little..To late, to win back this prize, maybe the next one like me, you'll treat right. As I think back to the time, when I, sight unseen,let u manipulate me and almost crush my dreams. Lost out on my love, gave way to loose living, I can forget, but I'll icksnay the forgiving,cuz I ain't the blind one,no longer the blind one...Here in my soul, i've gained control and brotha you will never again find the blind one...



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  2. MzBlkAngel

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    stay strong
    nice drop
    enjoyed this one
    Peace Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a wonderful thing to learn from your mistakes, I liked this drop.
     
  4. tUFFY

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    good work

    soul searching earth shattering news we don't need them we only want them ya know how it go. Glad you woke up. tUFFY :rolling:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done here poet
     
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    Ouch...very tyte. Never should've let you go. What a shame. Nice poem.
     
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    indeed we all learn as we grow into our own
    flow head speak on
     
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    wonderful flow poet
    Peace
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