Black Poetry : no hate allowed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Jun 24, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I search my soul
    seeking to right wrongs
    seeking to make good the bad
    to chase down any flaws
    that may be running rampant
    in my psyche
    considering not just myself
    but my future wifey
    even take advice-y
    or seek pearls of wisdom
    fearing to be the swine
    this wisdom is lost on
    I learn best I can from
    the wisdom of my fam
    and seek to apply it
    now I can't deny it
    I'm the type of person
    who wants full control
    yep... I want full control
    of myself
    nobody else
    but I do have rules
    cause see
    I'm just like you
    I don't want to be lied to
    don't want to be lied on
    don't want to be sold out
    don't want to be robbed
    don't want to be exploited
    don't want to be led on
    don't want to lead nobody on
    don't want to be slandered
    or called out my name
    don't want to play no games
    and "NO HATE ALLOWED" lol
    these things I simply have
    ZERO tolerance for
    now let me ask you
    pick any one of these rules
    that you yourself don't have
    for yourself
    is their any rule here that
    you don't have?
    to me these are some red flags
    cause if they happen at the giddy
    then why would I think they
    wouldn't continue to happen
    doesn't matter how
    desirable you are
    I'm too old to be thinkin'
    with anything other than my brain
    or at least for the most part
    wearin' too many battle scars
    from mistakes
    my own
    and other's... misdeeds
    I understand if you don't feel me
    to me it's simple enough
    if a shoe don't fit, don't wear it
    but I'll understand also
    if someone's holdin' you down
    tryin' to force it on your foot
    than that's another story, ain't it?

    (c)06/03/Michael
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is too tyte! i love it!
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte... im so feelin u on this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u jam dis flow here coz i felt ever wordz
     
  5. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx fam.
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Skrybe,

    This is wonderful piece. I am so feeling you on this one!! :toast:

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    This is a great piece, loved your ending!
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    hate is so ugly...
    thanks for bringing that to life
    peace
    khasm
     
  9. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx ya'll. I'm glad
    when the family feels me.
    Peace and love
     
  10. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow :)....I feel you on this....hate is just riducluous
     
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