Black Poetry : no forgiveness

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  1. brotherdarrows@

    brotherdarrows@ Member MEMBER

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    no forgiveness

    and it ain't because i am bitter

    just ain't feeling that

    am i to blame

    because i want the same thing to happen the same

    why should i resist the law

    an eye for an eye

    if i believe in the law why

    i cried and lost many

    who insurance pays for that

    deny my check for penalties commited

    when somebdy else did it

    forgive after right been right

    no right no jusice no light

    no forgiveness in sight

    thats why i am writing this tonight

    i want to live

    until its right i cannot forgive
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I certainly hear what you're saying ...
    but RIGHT, just ain't gonn be right until
    WE collectively make it RIGHT ...and make it stick.
    Nice drop poet, we're listening.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling every word of where you coming from......speak on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So true, not forgiving doesn't necessarily mean bitterness, what you want is justice. It's long over due, agreeing with you here poet.
     
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