Black Haiku : No Excuse For Hesitation (double haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bert, Mar 13, 2002.

  1. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I couldn't hold her
    because my arms lacked the strength
    to carry two hearts

    hesitation kills
    that's the long and short of it
    he's loving her now

    BRB
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bert,

    This is beautiful. I especilally loved the first haiku verse.
    Do ya have any mo? :)

    Joyce
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!! dis be a classic fo sho!
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A great picture you've painted here!

    N2 :)
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very enjoyable Haiku

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CLASSIC

    Mahhhhvelous.
     
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