Black Poetry : No Dignity Zone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, May 1, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did I not dress to impress
    Do I not speak like the rest
    Am I not a child in the womb of equality
    Or is it the concept of equality
    That’s got you scheming on me
    Lets cut to the chase
    is it the fear
    Of my possible superiority if given an opportunity
    Come on spit it out
    What is it about me
    I know
    Cant follow instructions
    Did not read the sign
    Crossed the line
    The NO DIGNITY ZONE line
    but
    Until you find yours
    I’ll just be keeping mine
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow!

    Nice flow true to form and substance!
    I like the impact in the end...
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb
    glad you liked it, just sharing some of my thoughts.

    sherykah
    thank you for the read
     
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