Black Poetry : No Defender

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  1. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    She has no defender.

    So she got to be careful. She is only a child. She got to become smarter, and be cleverer. In order to survive.

    She will stay clear of all adults, and hide within herself. She will make herself invisible, and walk without making a sound. When her shield goes down and she is seen. She will freeze.Keeping her head down with her eyes to the floor, and answer what ever asked with yes or no. Then she run and hide and become invisble.

    She is only a child, and must do as she is told, or get hit over and over again for the little things. She do as she is told, and when she is done. She run and she hides. Wipeing the tears that have stain her cheeks, and become invisible again. She walks without making a sound and sit down next to them. They don’t know that she is there. She is invisible to them. Being careful not make a sound.

    She is only a child. She has no defender. She has no father to protect her. She is feed and clothed. So she better be more graceful.

    She is only a child. She eats what is given to her. She wears what she is told. There is no one to come to her rescue. She got to become smarter, and cleverer if she is to survive. She is only a child. She has no defender. She got to hide. She got to hide. She got to survive.

    Learning at an early age no more then 6 years old. Praying that one day she will have some place to go.

    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart goes out to her
    She needs NOT be no pretender
    ALl she needs IS to look at God
    Because HE is the number 1 defender
    tyte piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes hold faith all she have
    dis here i'm lovin ya scribe
    tyteeeee flow .........mad vibing in here i c
     
  4. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    Thanks SwtT no child should ever be afraid in there home.

    Peace
     
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    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    Thanks RICH, Faith..keeping the Faith

    Peace
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Children lost in the world today. It happens to them everyday. Unthinking grown -ups what are they thinking. party's hosting dancing drinking. The job at hand is to take care of the chidren. They are the future and the hope of tomorrow.

    I enjoyed this poem.
     
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