Black Poetry : No Control

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cleopatrajones, Apr 15, 2002.

  1. cleopatrajones

    cleopatrajones Member MEMBER

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    Why am I in love with you?

    You don't give me what I need
    mentally, spiritually, emotionally
    I am bothered by your subject-verb disagreement
    your dangling participles that leave me confused
    I never thought I would compromise my integrity
    forgetting all I dislike about your ignorance
    just to have the one piece of you that makes me feel high

    Are you coming over tonight?
    Don't talk when you arrive
    It will kill the mood
    I had a rough day and I need you to be silent

    Just caress the peaks of my valley with your strongest muscle and cause me to erupt
    thrusting your steeple into my volcano
    overflowing and spilling lava

    I called out your name - and I came
    to my senses
    reminscent of all your broken english
    Stop! I can't do this
    Wait! continue

    You caress my breasts like a florist
    attending to fresh roses
    kneading them like raw dough
    gently and delicately

    I tasted life with you
    I saw paradise

    I hate you!
    I love you
    I hate you!
    I love you

    **** you!
    You make me sick!
     
  2. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome my A&M family!!! This was definitely a tight scribe for it to be your very first. You are about to make a lot of new poetic friends when making a debut like this. Griots!!! pass the Word!!!
     
  3. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ask butta how i zone, man cleopatra jones! and its tight like dat...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now dat's a women I can relate to, just shut up and do me.
    yea I really dig
     
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    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome to the Family Cleopatra Jones!

    continue to share your flow with us ... please!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rewind --second times are always better!!
     
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