Black Poetry : no chance of showers?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 7, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gray sky
    colorless rainbow
    in sypathetic drizzles relating..
    the sun suffocates awkwardly, submitting to hovering, thick clouds
    forbidding me vitality from a violet ray through my window
    l never would have predicted this weather- ever.
    l thought there was no chance of showers
    but l'm no meteorologist
    l miss her.
     
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    I am really, really feeling this, my brutha. This is simple yet profound.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somethin tells me she REALLY misses you too...
    TRUST ME she aint feelin no sunshine if you arent...
     
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    Ain't no sunshine...huh?

    Bill Withers said it and I second the emotion...nothing sadder than missing the love and devotion.
    But just as sure as the rain comes down, the sun will shine again...and until then
    You can have my umbrella my friend.

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    feelin you on this
    we all been here
    and the sun will shine again....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel ya here , i've had my day too
    when i miss her
    like nothing else seem right
    dis was tyteeeeeee!!!!!!!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow j...this was a really good read:)
     
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    i'm with trinit...ain't no sunshine for her if there isn't for you. i hope your showers stop soon. much love to you
     
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    emotionally deep
    much love to you
    Peace
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx famlee.

    l take all of this piece back.. it's hot as hell in the south :D

    really, this was just a reminder of the past experience that reminds me who is my light- G.O.D.

    showers have ended.
     
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