Black Poetry : ~Nita~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Dec 24, 2005.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everything comes to pass, as we all do know
    but yet, I wasn't ready, to let her go

    The 9 months she carried me, bonded us for life
    now she's gone away ....just don't seem right

    I have lost my job...
    I replaced that
    lost my money,
    I replaced that too

    But Mom...
    In as much as I lost you ...I didn't lose you at all,
    cause I know you'll hear your child, even before I call

    Yet, I must stay strong, so my daughter will know...
    that when the time come ...I too ...must go.

    Nita, much thanks for the poem of inspiration and love, it meant a lot.
     
  2. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queentswana, This poem was very touching
    It touched me and brung tears to my eyes
    I just want to offer you my condolences
    I will lift you and yours up in Prayer
    Love soblessed
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow I cry as I read
    Much Love Queen
    Your Prayers will be heard
    The Love & Support is always here
     
  4. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Qeen... so beautiful
    I am touched beyond measure.
    If I could give you anything
    my sister
    it would be serenity.
    My heart is with you....
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW

    This was truly a beautiful poem. The love I've seen here, these past few days has touched my Spirit so. I love you guys and I love you too Sister Queen.

    God Bless you all. :heart:
     
  6. bigdrizzle

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    Queentswana...My Queen, My Sista, My Friend...You are so strong...Your mom will alwayz live within you and ya daughter...We luv you...

    Now Mz. Nita Mae Boquisha Alize' Jenkins Smith (my Bo-Nita Applebum)...That was a great piece you did for QT's mom...It touched her as well as the rest of us who read it...Thanx 4 expressing our feelingz thru ya words...I guess we haveta luv u, too...Right?...lol...Naw, we do!

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a beautiful poem flow on poet.:star: :kiss1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So heartfelt queent. As with all things, this will take time. Sometimes there's no getting round it, it's going to hurt. But the pain will ease after a while. You have plenty of "hugs" here whenever you need one. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all this here.....sista deeply
     
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    *Standing Ovation* *Whiping tears* Look here now, stop making me mess up my invisible make up! ROFL I'm loving... Through a lose you've gained the urge to write.... and it is awesome. continue to enlighten me!