Black Poetry : Nini69

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  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She calls out in the distance
    only an echo
    mama always told her to be persistent
    so she couldn't let go


    I cry
    for now I know the meaning of you
    you were defined
    when the sky
    shined its sun on you


    As tears filled
    the ducts of my eye
    a lullaby
    was being sang from a window
    as I eased my pain on by
    so light
    the melody
    it drew me
    seemed as if
    the songstress new me
    and of all my heart's been through
    and how untrue...
    that you've been to me


    So she ran after her man
    who held his woes
    in both his hands
    past that window where his sorrows
    found a blessing...

    You see he stopped
    dropped
    and propped
    his pride
    at the bus stop
    that robbed him of his love

    allowing his distance
    and his differences
    closure
    as she expressed
    what her heart was made of

    sugar and spice
    fire and ice
    and if you ever try to leave me
    you'll be losing a life...
    get it...life?

    so share with me life
    give me your life
    ok then, be part of my life
    one day make me your wife

    cause those things NINI is what we be made of!! Inspired by U.

    :love:
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling your still brotherman
    keep postin and i'll keep reading
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bru~man bru~man !!!! now u know dis was off da hook
    man i felt dis str8 through my bones ....u flow head on!!!!
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fire and ice? u got a little luv floating 'round in your head too, bru

    tyte peace,
    dee
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Plead ya case Bruh!!

    The flo is off da chains!!
     
  6. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROTHERMAN!

    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND ONCE AGAIN YOU INSPIRE ME.




    "SOMETIMES YOU HAVE TO CLOSE YOUR EYES TO TRULY SEE"
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But see, I read yours too NINI, and you went there into my conciousness where Ptar dwelt in darkness before he said, "Let there be light. Amon, Amen babygirl.
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Fam,

    I didn't know all this love was in me all locked up and stuff!!! Ya' brang'n it OOOOUUUTTT!!
     
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