Black Poetry : Nights Without You

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nights Without You

    Nights without you are like street lights on a deserted corner
    in my past nothing to stay there nothing tangible to last.
    If only you where here with me, or I could actually reach out
    and take you in my arms.

    It would be as warm and comfortable as a baby being breast
    feed I miss you your always in my head. I have been too afraid
    to tell you that I would die without you, because of my building
    urgency inside might frighten you away, and there is nothing
    I want more than for you to stay.

    I am like a shy child that can let there mind wonder the world
    for months, I haven’t been on the prowl, not out for the hunt.
    But now with your ever present love in my heart flowing through
    my mind, body and soul, its hard to concentrate hard to keep
    things under control.

    Tonight I will let you go, even though the haunting thoughts
    chase me like a lion hunting their prey, I won’t ask you
    nor will I beg you to stay. But tonight is like no other
    without you is a strange and fearful solitude generating from
    the loneliest space of time, my mind.

    AqueenP***ing
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love dis here ........u let the mind flow of thoughts
    when da mental is lonely all u know is how u miss
    the warmth of comfort ......unto u i say da love
    will never drift away
    Tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! u flowin'
     
  3. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    $$RICH$$$

    Thank you so much , you making a lady feel sooooooo loved up in hea!!!!

    Queen
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a beautiful melancholy piece/peace!

    What a way with words what a picture your words created, I can almost see the subject sitting by the phone, beautifully expressed. I reallly could relate...as I am in a long distance relationship and I feel you scribe.

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A soft reality hit my heart
    As I read ya poem
    Feeling ya flow ma
    keep on keepin on!!!!

    Holla Back!
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sad but written so beautfiul, truly felt this one!!
    dig u!!
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's hard to let them go,
    knowing u want 2 scream NO!
    but love is an mysterious thing,
    we think 1 thing is something else-but it's the opposite of what u've seen.
    keep it comin',
    love yo man.
    he'll return,
    if he understands.................................(love is in the air 4 u)
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words only spoken from a Queen this is beautiful.
     
  9. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Everyone

    Aww you guys are all making me cry (smile)
    Now I am wondering what the hell took me so long to find my way back home! (smile)

    Thank you all so much for your lovely words and hugs I truly appreicate everyone taking the time to read my work....

    A humble poet
    Queen
    :wave:
     
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