Black Poetry : Nights Without You

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nights Without You

    Nights without you are like street lights on a deserted corner
    in my past nothing to stay there nothing tangible to last.
    If only you where here with me, or I could actually reach out
    and take you in my arms.

    It would be as warm and comfortable as a baby being breast
    feed I miss you your always in my head. I have been too afraid
    to tell you that I would die without you, because of my building
    urgency inside might frighten you away, and there is nothing
    I want more than for you to stay.

    I am like a shy child that can let there mind wonder the world
    for months, I haven’t been on the prowl, not out for the hunt.
    But now with your ever present love in my heart flowing through
    my mind, body and soul, its hard to concentrate hard to keep
    things under control.

    Tonight I will let you go, even though the haunting thoughts
    chase me like a lion hunting their prey, I won’t ask you
    nor will I beg you to stay. But tonight is like no other
    without you is a strange and fearful solitude generating from
    the loneliest space of time, my mind.

    Copyright by Yvonne Coleman-Burney (Queen) 2000
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside da space so free
    come s da depth of
    sweet little me
    to caress da thoughts
    and asure ya mind
    when it's these tymes
    i come to mind
    as i relax u in a mix
    trap da fears
    master da motion
    so u shell know my joy
    when tymes of lonelyness
    hit ya mind
    i have all da tyme to give .....

    nice flow poet !! keep flowing da feelings of emotions .
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "$RICH$

    Thanks
    I appreciate your poetic comments they always put a smile on my face...

    Hugs
    Queen
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this...your images and visions flow.
     
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