Black Haiku : Night's End

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  1. miko

    miko New Member MEMBER

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    Softly, quietly
    Dawn becomes an impish wind
    breathing down my neck.



    (Please forgive me if I haven't posted correctly. New here.)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    suddenly within
    as night rise upon moons light
    da dawn comes quickly
     
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    As one awakens
    to daylight, heavy eyelids
    shadow rays of sun

    (You posted this just fine miko, great haiku.)
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the wind stirring hairs
    breezes arousing my soul
    whispering "dawns here"


    a lovely haiku miko....
     
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    Ocean Radiantly Sways
    Flows :huh: Every way
    I'm Compelled to partake



    YALL WAS GETTING "UP' Up iN HERE!!!!

    Wonderful Haiku Miko
    And for the record..
    I think This was Only my second 1
    Since 7th Grade..LOL
    Loving the Flowing Love In here!!!!!!
    Alright I'm leaving....I'm Leaving
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    more awake in sleep
    truth my dreams spoke I listened
    ready for the sun

    (i think i get it... if not correct me)

    i think i have written one haiku in a lifetime.....
     
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    Miss Lady U got it ......great reply

    Just pass nightfall,we
    sit inside our slumbering
    maze as light arise
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    sunlight ends darkness
    rise and hold answers from night
    endless days end night
     
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    The wind cools my brow
    The softness warming my soul
    I can breath again
     
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    awakened
    by the 19 rays
    I arise to ponder
    is darkness really an illusion
     
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